Introduction:
Consider rephrasing the sentence: “Therefore, much attention has been focused on what should be given.” It’s a bit unclear.
According to Merriam-Webster, a healthy diet is defined as “a food (such as salmon, broccoli) that is rich in compounds (such as antioxidants, fiber or fatty acids, and vegetables) that are believed to be beneficial to a person’s health. Therefore, much attention has been focused on what should be given.
We eat many different foods to keep them healthy and tasty. By filling your plate with fruits, vegetables, quality protein sources, and other whole foods, you’ll get colorful, versatile, and good-for-you meals.
Apples:
In the sentence, “There is evidence that apples can protect against cancer, heart disease, and many types of diseases or some chronic diseases including diabetes,” consider removing “or some chronic diseases” as it seems redundant.
Bananas:
The sentence “Bananas are a nutritious, low-calorie fruit that may help example:” is incomplete. It seems like there’s a continuation missing after “help.”
Eggs:
In the sentence, “Is it right to eat eggs every day?” consider adding a comma after “day” to make it grammatically correct: “Is it right to eat eggs every day?”
Meat:
The sentence “Meat or other edible parts of animals (usually domestic cattle, goats, and sheep) are used for food, including not only muscle and fat but also many other good functions,” could be clarified. It seems like there’s a list of functions missing after “but also many other good functions.”
Nuts and seeds:
In the last sentence, “Nuts work very well as one of the proteins,” it’s not clear what “one of the proteins” refers to. It might need rephrasing for clarity.